It's 2:45 am so this probably won't make sense, but basically it's a rendition of my character Joshua Oswald (from Project Future), as Agent JC Denton from the classic Warren Spector game, Deus Ex.
As usual, Ren ( 'siegfriednox' on FA ) did the pencils, I did the inking and colouring.
The background was mostly poached from something I did for Ren's birthday last month (which will be uploaded here when Keaton finishes colouring it).
Hope you enjoy it, it was certain fun to do.
I can't honestly remember what gave Ren the idea to do in the first place, though...
Kawaii!
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You did a pretty decent job on the inking, just keep an eye on certain things that have way too thick an outline though, e.g. belts and such.
For the coloring, I see you tried to add highlights, and that's good, but don't forget about shadows too. Think about where the light is shining from, and where it might cast a shadow. Obvious places to start would be the inside of his coat. his neck, and his forehead.
The background does suit the mood very well, even if you say it's "poached"
The line width is an issue on this particular piece owing to the fact that I was given a low-res pencil to work from. I could probably have fixed a lot of that but then I wouldn't have slept at all.